Tuesday, January 9, 2007

Brindavan Express

Many would have travelled in Brindavan Express. But only a few would have experienced what i am gonna say now.

Like many i too was trying for MBBS. So i applied for AFMC [Armed Forces Medical College in Pune] Entrance exam. I got the centre for writing exam in Bangalore.
It was 1st of May 2004. I boarded the train early morning [sorry i forgot the time]. Me and my uncle were travelling. Asusual i sat near the window and was holding a big book [much similar to a BiiiiiG Oxford Dictionary]. But actually i didnt have interest and so i was just staring at others about what they were doing.
After half an hour, i was disturbed by something. i looked diagonally at the seat in the next cabin. She was just like an ANGEL [not like.... she's an angel]. She was very much attractive, Charming........ I haven't seen anyone like her. I saw the glittering stars in her eyes. Her hair neatly combed. She was both like a modern and homely girl. I was very much attracted. I cant keep my eye away from her. I didn't even bother about my uncle whether he's noticing me. All i did is.... STARE, STARE, STARE at her. I felt as if i were travelling along with her.
At one moment she noticed me that i was staring. But to my surprise she did the same......... I was very much happy thinking that at least one figure is staring at me [sounds FUNNY]. Frequently we were smiling at each other. [Dont ask for what... even i too don't know]. Whenever she smiled at me, My Little Heart broke into pieces like a Breaking glass. When the train halted, i happened to see what station i am in. Bangalore City was the next station. I was wondering how the 6 hours have passed. Its time to depart now. Felt like something. I decided to talk to her. But at that time only i watched my uncle. He started walking away from me in the station. So just like that i left and followed my uncle, hoping to see her in that two days.
But certainly i didn't.......... It was just a CRUSH...... :)

I cant forget this day. Thats how i was able to give the date exactly. I was effusive thinking abt her while writing the exam too... She was someone special in my life because she reciprocated what i expected from her.

11 comments:

kumar raja said...

there could have been a twist in the end. like the extremely beautiful girl is blind.

p.s : my idea is only a blind gal will sight our kutty jaya.

Kavya Mohan said...

alright..that was cute..
but few times the girl can be curious than excited that a guy is checking her out.. guess you were lucky and got a smile back ;)
i find it very weird when a guy stares at me. he ends getting a cold stare back.. hee hee..

Jayku said...

@ kumar
brother, u are jealous of me.....
anyway thats ok.....
dont worry, a time will come for u too.... [:)]

@kavya.....
i think miracles will happen very rarely. If somebody stares at u, obiviously its a MIRACLE.
Hope to happen it soon for u. [:)]

Anonymous said...

So....how did u write the exam ? You saw stars in her eyes eh...? Oho....!!!
She must have looked at you asking herself "Why is this creature looking at me ?" with a fake smile on her face....u did not understand that....soooo unfortunate...!!!
Now...dont reply that am jealous of u thats why am telling like that...ok va...i have had many experiences like this....!!!

Jayku said...

thats funny....lol....:)
nice try!

Zen Dude said...

very nice one......

Jayku said...

thanks da.....

Unknown said...

wat so it is buddy one chance god had given u to see then who knows will u get tat or not in ur life time da....

kumar raja said...

dai venna why have you used the comments section to reply da..

Anonymous said...

un karpanaiku oru alavae illame poguthae....

Anonymous said...

Thanks for writing this.